Wait For Me

Photo Credit: Angie McMonigal Photography

“Wait for me,” he called to her when they were children trudging through freshly fallen snow.

She didn’t wait.

But eventually he caught up.

And they built elegant snow angels and elaborate fortresses together.

“Wait for me,” he begged twelve years later when she fled their gloomy hometown and he, one year younger, bided his time until he would graduate high school, wiling away the days like an idle sloth bear in the rainforest canopy.

She didn’t wait.

But eventually he caught up.

And they walked through Central Park holding hands, and made love in their tiny studio apartment to the sounds of car horns and angry drunks on the street below.

“Wait for me,” he breathed in her ear a year later when he returned to their depressing hometown to work at his uncle’s hardware shop.

She didn’t wait.

But eventually he caught up.

And he returned with pockets filled with hard-earned cash and a tiny velvet jewelry box, and he got down on one knee in the middle of the restaurant where she had been dining with an inadequate substitute for him.  Six months later he waited for her at the front of a small church while she floated down the aisle in an ivory satin sheath.

She never waited; it didn’t suit her personality. She was impetuous and dramatic, impatient and independent. He knew that about her and he loved that about her.

Fortunately, he was good at catching up. He would find her – transformed in a way that only time and distance can allow – and they would fall in love all over again.

He died on a steamy August morning in a cramped hospital room. After the initial diagnosis, he had died quickly, with little waiting around. And now that he was gone, she felt like her safety harness had come unbuckled and her footing had slipped. She was in a free fall, the world swirling and spinning around her.

And there was nothing she could do but wait.

This post is a first for me for two reasons:
(1) It is the first piece of fiction that I have written for this blog. While the characters in the story are purely fictional, I suppose it is a universal truth that we are all waiting for someone or something.
(2) It is the first time I am linking up with Trifecta, which issues a challenge each week to write a post that is between 33 and 333 words and includes the 3rd definition of a designated word. This week the word is

1: lacking worth or basis : vain <idle chatter> <idle pleasure>
2: not occupied or employed: as
a : having no employment : inactive <idle workers>
b : not turned to normal or appropriate use <idle farmland>
c : not scheduled to compete <the team will be idle tomorrow>
3: a : shiftless, lazy
b : having no evident lawful means of support


This post is also part of the weekly Photo Inspiration Challenge.  Special thanks to Angie McMonigal Photography for her fabulous photos.  Make sure to visit her website or facebook page. Her work is both stunning and, well, inspirational.


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